Finders Keepers chapter 5
Thank you for you comments and a special thanks to Laura for her help and suggestions.Chapter Five The next morning as Lucinda cleaned up the cabin she thought of the previous night. She couldn’t...
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Let's hope Jarrod is right and Heath will be fine. The suspense is building.
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Well, I hope Jarrod will be right but I am not so sure. cas
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Two heads are always better than one, Heath. You should've taken Nick up on his offer. I hope the family checks in on him.
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I loved this bit if dialog, so Heath-like.Did your father tell you they were partners?" "No, he didn't." "Who did?" "Roger." "Oh." The plot thickens, Heath is watching, the bad guys are lurking. Will...
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Lucinda will be none too happy when she finds out that Heath too is watching her, even if it is for her own good. Hurry back
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Hope this girl turns out to be worth all the trouble Heath may be getting himself into.
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Years on the trail and his experience as a deputy had taught his brother how to take care of himself.I hope so, Jarrod... but I'm worried.HUGS! Patti
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Lucinda had better be grateful the "light hair and muscular build" (Thud!) guy is looking out for her. Debbie
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Snooty gal from St. Louis.... sounds a bit like a protective big brother talking. Well done with the descriptions of the terrain.
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Interesting story. ‘Snooty’ Lucinda needs to climb down off her high horse and see reality as it is, before it’s too late. Something in the tone made her feel foolish. She gathering up her reins, she...
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